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Poetry for the underapreciated. *DELETED*
#478918 - Tue Apr 20 2004 04:06 PM
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A messy mind's the sign of a tidy desk.. or something. 'Tis a good poem, make sure you save some others. I would like to see. Sometimes they flow like silk rivers, and it feels good to be inside the skin that's given them.
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Nae Kill'n shadoes. Terebi wa hidoi desu. Mo, baka desu.
Hmm.. I mean to say. The vibe is strong, the villian is miscast though. It lurks behind our eyes, not in the bushes outside. Prejudice finds it's vector in TV, but it's the one in the bushes, the TV's singing and dancing to distract you from that fact.
Heheh.. Good poem, it generated strong opinion in me
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After looking the thread over, I don't think I can put music to any of the poems. The first one, on journeys, is closest, but the line lengths are a bit irregular.
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